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I still see your light.

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by , 09-01-2008 at 03:49 AM (815 Views)
The doves over the water
they fly across the sea
to find a bit of heaven
a place for just you, from me.

God may have taken you
too soon from me
but he called you home
"My child, come back to me"

Whispers in the wind
sound just like your hum
The lord wanted you
to sing his recessional song

The reverberation of your laugh
still moves in my ears
like a gentle wave rolling
over the footprints of bad times.

I know you watch over me,
but I still shut my eyes tight,
hoping to see you.
You may be gone from my arms, my love,
but I still see your light.




Just a poem I wrote for my aunt after she passed away...anybody like it?

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  1. CHANDLERS WISH's Avatar
    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am gobsmacked? You wrote that?

    I mentioned you had a way with words, that bought tears to my eyes, reminding me of my special person, my Grandmother...

    How to say what i think? Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful just like your photo.
  2. CHANDLERS WISH's Avatar
    I kind of walked away and "saw the light" haha.

    acerousme, write more... much more, in poetry form of anything, everything, and aim at a book one day, i will help you when you get to that stage in HOW?

    You have a gift that now you have found, inspiring, free, do you know what I mean?

    CW
  3. acerousme's Avatar
    lol....Ya...I wrote that in like....2 minutes.
    thanks!
    I'll take you up on your helping me one day...lol.
    I'd like to write a book....I think It would be fun!!!
  4. N01's Avatar
    very well done!

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