I still see your light.
Posted 09-01-2008 at 04:49 AM by acerousme
The doves over the water
they fly across the sea
to find a bit of heaven
a place for just you, from me.
God may have taken you
too soon from me
but he called you home
"My child, come back to me"
Whispers in the wind
sound just like your hum
The lord wanted you
to sing his recessional song
The reverberation of your laugh
still moves in my ears
like a gentle wave rolling
over the footprints of bad times.
I know you watch over me,
but I still shut my eyes tight,
hoping to see you.
You may be gone from my arms, my love,
but I still see your light.
Just a poem I wrote for my aunt after she passed away...anybody like it?
they fly across the sea
to find a bit of heaven
a place for just you, from me.
God may have taken you
too soon from me
but he called you home
"My child, come back to me"
Whispers in the wind
sound just like your hum
The lord wanted you
to sing his recessional song
The reverberation of your laugh
still moves in my ears
like a gentle wave rolling
over the footprints of bad times.
I know you watch over me,
but I still shut my eyes tight,
hoping to see you.
You may be gone from my arms, my love,
but I still see your light.
Just a poem I wrote for my aunt after she passed away...anybody like it?
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Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am gobsmacked? You wrote that?
I mentioned you had a way with words, that bought tears to my eyes, reminding me of my special person, my Grandmother... How to say what i think? Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful just like your photo. |
Posted 09-01-2008 at 04:54 AM by CHANDLERS WISH
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Let me add, sorryI kind of walked away and "saw the light" haha.
acerousme, write more... much more, in poetry form of anything, everything, and aim at a book one day, i will help you when you get to that stage in HOW? You have a gift that now you have found, inspiring, free, do you know what I mean? CW |
Posted 09-01-2008 at 04:58 AM by CHANDLERS WISH
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lol....Ya...I wrote that in like....2 minutes.
thanks! I'll take you up on your helping me one day...lol. I'd like to write a book....I think It would be fun!!! |
Posted 09-11-2008 at 08:14 PM by acerousme
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very well done!
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Posted 09-12-2008 at 03:12 PM by N01
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