loneliness
Posted 09-25-2008 at 05:59 PM by JWB_pof
Sometimes I sit at night looking at the stars alone
Looking for a bright star that isn’t there
Coldness creeps up upon me and chills set in
Wishing for someone to keep me warm
Thoughts run through my mind like water in a stream
Every drop reminds me of the woman I love
She’s not here beside me for reasons unexplained
Loneliness quietly sits down beside me
I talk to loneliness searching for answers
I ask how come, what happened to us, why feel all the pain
But he doesn’t reply to any of my questions
Still I have no answers
So I get up from the ill where I sat
Wiping those tears that formed that stream
All I can ask of loneliness as I walk away
Is to not visit the woman that left me
Looking for a bright star that isn’t there
Coldness creeps up upon me and chills set in
Wishing for someone to keep me warm
Thoughts run through my mind like water in a stream
Every drop reminds me of the woman I love
She’s not here beside me for reasons unexplained
Loneliness quietly sits down beside me
I talk to loneliness searching for answers
I ask how come, what happened to us, why feel all the pain
But he doesn’t reply to any of my questions
Still I have no answers
So I get up from the ill where I sat
Wiping those tears that formed that stream
All I can ask of loneliness as I walk away
Is to not visit the woman that left me
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You know how much I appreciate poetry...Jaydub that was most beautifull..you should continue.
I hope you dont mind but can I post one........?
she bends her head
bowed down
whispering prayers
in her heart
can you hear them?
see her genuflection
obedient to a higher
divine intention
she waits nerveless
with tingling sensation
alone and knows
with certainty
not much longer
no not much
the beat...
the beat...
the beat...
of thoughtful
reflection
upon the walls
of heaven
and the sky bursts forth
a splendid flower
fireworks
behind her eyelids
the upward curve of heaven
blooms upon her lips
like promises
as her gaze becomes
like diamonds
bright with truth
realized
not much longer
no not much
the gift...
the gift...
the gift...
is comingPosted 09-26-2008 at 09:56 PM by tropicalgrl1
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It seems that lonliness indeed had the answer, but needed the spirit of a woman
to speak her words.
Tropical Girl rang them loud
where one walks a path they come to
a dead end, she will.
Where one walks a path with light,
there is no end, only her, the real
angel waiting along that road for you
to find her.Posted 09-29-2008 at 03:16 PM by CHANDLERS WISH 
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Oh là là... JWB...
If I could I would hug you...
Surely I would...
My heart swelled up as I read...
I have no answers...
I have felt the presence of loneliness also...
In many forms of abandonment...
I hope I do not sound condescending ...
Time does ease the pain...
There is no magic recipe either...
I offer you a friendly hand
and hopefully you see a friend in me...
Because, I do find a friend in you...Posted 09-29-2008 at 08:37 PM by annasthasia
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oh wait a minute. i must add that these are not written from this year or last. these were written over 7 years ago by myself.
i had made many, actually i filled a notebook of my poems as i just sat thought and wrote everything down. poems, thoughts, dreams, everything.
i hhad so many i started to put them into my computer. and then my computer pooped out on me so i had lost almost all them.
i even had enough one day and one of my good friends asked me where are all my poems. i told her i had enough and burnt them all.
i should had saved some, but most were not good enough. i dont think they were as good as they could have been.
but just keep in mind that these were from years ago, not now.
pfffffffft as chandler types, "quoted"
she lost out, not me, i can improve who is in my life, she can't...............Posted 09-30-2008 at 12:10 AM by JWB_pof
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PFFTTTTTTT.....
haha, cute.
And, you already HAVE.....
We are in your life ..........
X+x = KISSESPosted 09-30-2008 at 04:01 AM by CHANDLERS WISH
