Thread: Look at me?

look at me tell me what you see
if you was in my position tell me
where would you be
for someone whos been threw the ropes and had the blade in the vains
and still living still in pain
look at me tell me what you see
you think im weak you think im less than you
let me show you where people in my place is now
some 6ft under
some are working the coners
sticking needles
sentencing there lives
big bosses cheating out there family's and wife,
where does this road end
for a person whos me i think ive done a better
so what you see when you look at me
a mother
a wife
im someone who gives life
im a lover and fighter
im a survivor
do you blame me!!!





(ive been writing my poems on here for a while now and i look forward to what my readers think bad or good everyones views matter to me so please tell me what you thought of it)

yes his usally tents to happen to me because i jus focous on getting it down more than spelling and grammar im sorry for that i dont go over my work