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Reply With QuoteAgreed- A light touch if the work submitted is free from errors and has a clear and defined audience and purpose.Originally Posted by WildChild
A good editor has a light touch, you took much of her sense of light heartedness out of it. Your version has a different feel to it.I take it my revisions didn't please you?
Sorry about above, I didn't edit it just pushed a wrong button.
We can only learn to love by loving. - Iris Mudoch, British writer
Agreed- A light touch if the work submitted is free from errors and has a clear and defined audience and purpose.
the audience was women....its purpose??
Hang in there.
Price charming doesnt exsist. If he did, there would be proof.
Thank you WC
My first article was to show people that I have a sense of humor...now that Im a romantic bimbo. lol
The children almost broken by the world become the adults most likely to change it-PostSecret
Haha, you are correct. Prince Charming may though, if he takes the time to understand women, the difference between man and woman, and their needs, emotions and sexual prowess and the knowledge that he would require the same in a woman....Price charming doesnt exsist. If he did, there would be proof.
You may just have to wait a few years then sweet.
Keep kissing the frogs
CW
Do we not realise that in order to find a soul
It doesn't happen over night
if truth were to be told.
Like everything in life that's hard to achieve
you must believe!
ha ha ha....POINT out my spelling error mum...
its my keyboard...it sucks.
and no more frogs...THATS how a lady gets warts...lol
The children almost broken by the world become the adults most likely to change it-PostSecret
I'm tired of frogs and toads and jack-well you know that animal also known as a mule.
We can only learn to love by loving. - Iris Mudoch, British writer
HAHA, Guess I won't find a guy called Jack then will I WC.......
Whilst "he is out there" seriously, the one's I've had a date with or spoken to and "NOT" dated, just amaze me with their baggage ......
Never mind!!
I'll kiss a Toad then.
Do we not realise that in order to find a soul
It doesn't happen over night
if truth were to be told.
Like everything in life that's hard to achieve
you must believe!
Could have done with a proofreading.
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I thought I should post this....so...whadya think???
I know...but I was so excited to post it!! I am DARN proud of myself. This was only the rough draft, and after it went to my editor, it came out perfect.
The children almost broken by the world become the adults most likely to change it-PostSecret
Geez, wait till she writes a Movie, "critics" lol....
Do we not realise that in order to find a soul
It doesn't happen over night
if truth were to be told.
Like everything in life that's hard to achieve
you must believe!
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