[Trixareforkids]

Oh definitely naughty. It's the 1st of a connected series of erotic fiction. I've tried my hand at it before and it always came in fits and starts and never really coalesced into anything readable. This time it came pouring out. I just finished it. Seventeen hours straight, stopping only to pee and feed little bit, well and the one time for thumb cramps (my thumb hurts like a MFer right now, lol). I know I'll need to go back through and edit it but I really think it's good, I know I need a shower now anyway and I REALLY wish the hubby was home and my mom & daughter weren't.

I fleshed out 8 decent characters and two more sketchy ones and each one connects to the next until we come back to the start. This 1st one is nearly 60 handwritten pages, so probably 20-25 typed. If I can get them all together it'll make a decent sized erotic novel/short story collection.

Now I just need to find a couple of objective editors. I've got one in mind, my BFFs mom, she's a voracious reader like me and I know she delves into some erotica, I think she'd be willing to give me a good critical review. No one else in my circle would be up for it, so I may have to go questing online to find my 2nd and 3rd.

[jen1447]

17 hours straight, holy wow.

[DivorcedDad]

Guys always love to be woken up for booty!

[mandrus]

This isnt even a question. For me, one of my all time favorite fantasies is a woman waking me and taking me. My wife has done this once in the 10 years we have been together and it was pretty recently (I am sure I had mentioned that to her a long time ago and I am sure she forgot). There is nothing sexier than a woman that wants you so badly, she breaks you out of a slumber to have you.

[jns]

Trix, how is the naughty novel going?

[Trixareforkids]

Got the 1st edit of chapter one done, but I lost so much sleep writing and re-writing/editing that I was a zombie for a couple of days and then FINALLY last night passed out at 6:30 and slept until 9:30 this morning. So I'll be starting chapter 2 tonight. I'm doing each chapter as connected but stand alone stories which will eventually circle back around to the beginning, it's going to take a lot of editing/re-write I think to make sure they're cohesive and that the details match in the cross-overs. The original writing is like a frenzy where I don't stop until I'm done or I drop, lol so it's in the review that I do a lot of the clean up.

[effy2014]

Good for you Trix. I. Sure it will be wonderful.

[Trixareforkids]

Good for you Trix. I. Sure it will be wonderful.

Ha! As a 1st real effort I'm really just hoping for readable, LOL Good would be nice, wonderful is doubtful

P.S. It'll be a learning/growing experience no matter how it turns out, if the product is good so much the better, but it's really mostly about the process and finding my groove and setting up my writing habits.

[Motorguy]

Got the 1st edit of chapter one done, but I lost so much sleep writing and re-writing/editing that I was a zombie for a couple of days and then FINALLY last night passed out at 6:30 and slept until 9:30 this morning. So I'll be starting chapter 2 tonight. I'm doing each chapter as connected but stand alone stories which will eventually circle back around to the beginning, it's going to take a lot of editing/re-write I think to make sure they're cohesive and that the details match in the cross-overs. The original writing is like a frenzy where I don't stop until I'm done or I drop, lol so it's in the review that I do a lot of the clean up.

Congrats on the first chapter being done Trix. What is your book going to be about if I can asked that. Sounds like you really put a lot of work in this for chapter one.

[Trixareforkids]

It's about sex No, seriously, relationships and connections. Each of the characters is going to have different relationship issues and the sex will depend on what their issue is. The next chapter is about a guy that doesn't like to be touched by other people, it's going to be fun I think, the sex will be much different because of his touch aversion. The 1st chapter was from the point of view of a young girl that watched her parents terrible relationship and wants nothing to do with love. Her story is going to evolve more throughout the rest of the stories and end on a hopefully happy note, but it may go another direction as things evolve.